Yeeep. The Cyborg Werewolf story is broken like a big, broken Thing.
The problem with it is that my protagonist doesn't actually protag. He's swept along by events and doesn't actually make a decision until the final paragraph...
And neither beta who's gotten back to me so far are sure that's the right decision.
It's the decision I want him to make. So I guess I just have to explain his thinking better. Or come ( Read more... )
And neither beta who's gotten back to me so far are sure that's the right decision.
It's the decision I want him to make. So I guess I just have to explain his thinking better. Or come ( Read more... )
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True, dat.
My RP partner thinks there's a baby under all that bathwater; I just have to be careful about which is which when I open the window and toss it into the street. Fortunately, I have a month to beat it into some semblance of shape.
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