Snippet Saturday!

May 08, 2010 12:53

Back with Ben. And go:

Ben snapped awake to find the collar around his neck, his arms cuffed far too tightly behind him, and wolfsbane wrapped around his bare chest. How had he gotten covered in blood? Was that Ange's blood? In his mouth ( Read more... )

oh julie frost no, snippets

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wekm May 16 2010, 15:20:54 UTC
This is NOT where I need to come into the new story of Ben!
Why must you torture me so...
Please send me whatever you have on the second part of his story. I just recently reread what you gave me at LTUE and am totally twitching for more, you evil literary crack dealer you.

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agilebrit May 16 2010, 16:35:07 UTC
Oh, god, what I have is so not ready for public consumption except in teasers like this. It's 145,000 words, I haven't actually written the actual opening scene yet (although I know what it is), and I've still got a good 20K before the first draft is done. It's way disjointed right now.

But you can click on the snippets tag and read more of what I've posted here. Which... might be a bad idea, actually. Because I'm mean and don't generally set up these little excerpts, like, at all.

I did fix the thing with the stun gun and the sap gloves in the first one--thanks for that. :)

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wekm May 19 2010, 14:27:41 UTC
I am NOT public consumption!
Just think of me as a fanboy/writing group/friend who REALLY wants MORE of the story.
Please don't make me beg....

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