It's better. Way better. My word choices before were problematic and pulling me out of the scene rather than into it. I finally remembered that panic attacks have more physical reactions than just OMG CAN'T BREATHE and have incorporated them.
Now I can't breathe. Seriously, I've got the shakes. Hopefully, so will a reader who isn't nearly as
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Aha-HA. Twilight. Am struggling through the first book. My brane doth protest at the asshattery. Bella and Edward make Buffy and Angel look like Tristan and Isolde. And they aint!
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I mean, really. Sparkly, vegetarian vampires. There's not enough NO in the world for that.
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Do it for me PLEASE!!!
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You really should goto the Twilight Release Party, and take pictures! If I was there I would totally join you.
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*is now hopelessly lost in the entries of TV Tropes*
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After I finished that (and watching linked Youtube video of everything with The Master) I made myself stop.
...but I know I'll be back later.
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*snuggles Deadpool*
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