Well.

[agilebrit]

It's better. As I've said before, it's amazing how much sticking a clause in the middle of a sentence rather than at the end can rack up the tension in an entire scene

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[lizbeth_mairead]

My aunt had the same run in with Texas Roadhouse. Of course she was in Montana at the time. Texas Roadhouse is best here in Texas of course. Yeah, my dad wants to take my mom and me out to Olive Garden tonight and I just laughed at him.

I'm going for a week of nothing but vegetables... which is unthinkable for me, but I'm going to try it. I just had a salad and it took all the willpower in me to eat a cucumber (I hate those things) and use just a little dressing. I'm horrible with my weight, but I'm trying to change that... on the bright side, eating veggies really kills my appetite. So, I'm eating good AND eating less! FTW! ;D

[crayonbreakygal]

I went to pick up takeout last night and the parking lot was packed. Argh. Yeah, I think there were lots of people that had that idea!

Oooh, lots of scribbles. I'd go eeep too. That means you might need to make changes. Eeeep.

[agilebrit]

Oh, I know I need to make changes. I'm just too close to the thing to figure out what they are. Thus me handing it over to the Hubby, who is always honest with his opinions.