Comments | agilebrit: I hate my brain.

agilebrit

I hate my brain.

Jan 01, 2009 16:15

It's not bad enough that I've snapped Tony right in half...but I feel like I haven't actually gone far enough. This scene is too shortWhich, of course it is, because "badwrong porn" is not a genre I write in and thus I have no earthly idea what I'm doing ( Read more... )

badwrong fic, iron man

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agilebrit January 1 2009, 23:50:43 UTC

It just seems like I haven't, I don't know, built up to it enough or something. I broke him too soon, or she got to the bad part too soon. Something.

GYAH.

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agilebrit January 2 2009, 01:35:05 UTC

*dies* Yes, I'm broken. Just from the damb research.

ithildyn January 1 2009, 23:46:03 UTC

You are a constant source of amusement! Just sayin'! LOL

agilebrit January 1 2009, 23:53:07 UTC

Glad I can entertain you. *snerk*

Even if it is at the expense of one of my favorite characters. *pets Tony*

lady_moriel January 2 2009, 00:35:56 UTC

Could she, I dunno, start playing with his arc reactor? Seems like that would make him flip out whether he's tied up or not, especially if it's after he already had to switch it out and knows how vulnerable he is without it, or something. Of course this would have to be before Obadiah stole his, but still.

I dunno, I'm just talking out of my arse here. Maybe if you post some snippets it would help.

agilebrit January 2 2009, 00:38:16 UTC

I'm going to get into that right before he passes out.

This is about two weeks after he comes back from Afghanistan.

texanfan January 2 2009, 14:32:32 UTC

Consider it a chance to really dig in to that emotion drain that causes you trouble. You can go all out with this.

agilebrit January 2 2009, 18:41:33 UTC

Tell you what... I'm shaking writing it, and re-reading it. Holy COW.