Comments | agilebrit: Couldn't resist...

agilebrit

Couldn't resist...

Jun 25, 2007 21:49

So I left the aforementioned badfic author a review on her newly-uploaded JLU fic.

( Behind the cut, because, are y'all bored yet? )

sun's and stars, beefic, reviews

Comments 9

emptyfuneral June 26 2007, 04:07:50 UTC

Are you having your own private war on punctuation?
I think I'd like to copy this one down and stick it on my wall. Or at least keep it in my backpack as a go-to comment whenever I'm asked to read a classmate's paper because I have seen quite a bit of awful stuff.

agilebrit June 26 2007, 04:24:33 UTC

I swear, it's a conspiracy...

emptyfuneral June 26 2007, 04:29:27 UTC

Don't you mean:

I sware...its a conspiracy

?

agilebrit June 26 2007, 04:36:14 UTC

Conspeeresy, maybe?

OW. That was painful to type.

crayonbreakygal June 26 2007, 04:52:39 UTC

Is this what we're teaching our children? Good grief. Someone must have been asleep when grammar was taught. Gah!

agilebrit June 26 2007, 04:58:09 UTC

IF grammar was taught...

whirligigged June 26 2007, 04:53:25 UTC

I can't believe you even managed to read that far. I think I skimmed up to to "they both realised Diana was indeed married" and stopped before I decided to put myself out of my own misery. I commend you for your bravery. ;)

agilebrit June 26 2007, 04:59:05 UTC

I skimmed most of it. My poor eyes. *stanches blood*

curiouswombat June 26 2007, 12:05:54 UTC

I'm fairly certain that Bruce didn't really mean to mention Diana's nasal cavities when he said

You are a cruel woman - and we all love you for it!

I am wondering how she is actually spelling it for it to be changed to sinus - my first thought was 'sins' - but then that is a perfectly good word in itself. 'Sinse'? But wouldn't autocprrect change that to 'sins' or 'since'? I am beginning to think she may actually be spelling it sinus!!