Fic: Gun Control Means Hittin' Your Target -- Firefly -- Jayne&Kaylee

[agilebrit]

Title: Gun Control Means Hittin' Your Target
Author: babies stole my dingo (agilebrit)
Fandom: Firefly
Rating: PG-13 (default)
Length: Short story (a little over 2000 words)
Disclaimer: Joss is the genius behind these characters; I am but a lowly follower. I make no money from any of this, so please don't sue me.
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Comments

[texanfan]

I really liked Jayne appealing to Kaylee's engineer side. Nice smooth transition from the lesson to defending Jayne, and you didn't make her an instant sharpshooter. Nicely underplayed.

[agilebrit]

Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)