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bookaddict43 September 6 2006, 08:03:15 UTC
Excellent story. Simon not wanting the dog there then straining all his resources to save it is so him.

Love the dog defending Jayne and his reactions to it, specially the final one.

I like Mal & the Shepherd quipping about Shepherd Jayne! *giggle*

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agilebrit September 6 2006, 19:54:27 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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texanfan September 6 2006, 18:45:20 UTC
Oh yeah! That hit it! I really loved your last line, that had impact. This story gives me a little bittersweet smile at the end, which is what I think you were shooting for. You gave Book's mini-sermon more punch without getting wordy. Bravo!

I've never been so enthusiastically thanked for a bit of concrit! Wow!

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agilebrit September 6 2006, 19:58:28 UTC
Aw, thanks! Seriously, your crit told me exactly what I needed to hear. Even the Hubby, who's usually very good at telling me WHAT doesn't work, was flummoxed by this (although his negative feelings for the original ScruffDog might have colored his perception). You hit it perfectly. ::hugs::

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