Here it is...
Honestly, I'd adore some concrit on this. Like I keep saying, it's self-indulgent, but I'd like it to be good and self-indulgent rather than crap and self-indulgent.
Title: Perplexing Sentiments
Author: babies stole my dingo (agilebrit)
Fandom: Angel
Rating: PG-13 for violence, language, and blood
Length: Short story (a little over
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It's a very good beginning-a very sturdy framework. Lots of room to become a nice little romance, or a search to understand our own humanity, or an action-packed thriller.
If this were a book I'd be hurrying to the next page to see which it will be. Guess I'll have to wait!
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Glad you liked it. :-)
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