Comments | agilebrit: Annnd....here it is.

agilebrit

Annnd....here it is.

May 04, 2005 15:42

Here it is...
Honestly, I'd adore some concrit on this. Like I keep saying, it's self-indulgent, but I'd like it to be good and self-indulgent rather than crap and self-indulgent.

Title: Perplexing Sentiments
Author: babies stole my dingo (agilebrit)
Fandom: Angel
Rating: PG-13 for violence, language, and blood
Length: Short story (a little over ( Read more... )

ats, spike/illyria, spillyria, fic: angel, fic

Comments 13

myfeetshowit May 6 2005, 23:25:19 UTC

Oh, please continue to indulge.

It's a very good beginning-a very sturdy framework. Lots of room to become a nice little romance, or a search to understand our own humanity, or an action-packed thriller.

If this were a book I'd be hurrying to the next page to see which it will be. Guess I'll have to wait!

agilebrit May 7 2005, 02:07:42 UTC

*ponders* I've got several fics in what I'm starting to call the ColdComfortVerse now. It's fun to play around with the idea of Spike and Illyria dodging the Senior Partners and exploring their relationship while they're at it. I may have to do a post-"Gift" fic next, with Illyria instead of Fred...

Glad you liked it. :-)