sparrow through the heart

[aggybird]

RIGHT. Clearly, there's something wrong with me because I never update this fast.

Part One | Part Two | Part Three | Part Four | Part Five | Part Six | Part Seven | Part Eight | Part Nine

Comments

[miaruma]

Clearly, there's something wrong with me because I never update this fast. YOU MEAN THERE'S SOMETHING VERY RIGHT WITH YOU?

:D~ *off to read*

[miaruma]

Ahahaha. AHAHAHAH. how are you so awesome? :D FLIGHT CLUB. FISHING ON A STAR, THE PELICAN SAYING. Although ... what does Paul look like, because having a octuple chin is not sexy >.>
I love that a) Talon FINALLY has gotten a clue, b) he is playing matchmaker himself and c) hahahaha Flit's getting kind of desperate now, isn't he? Throwing everything at Talon to see what sticks :D

[aggybird]

I can't help myself, I LOVE THE PUNS. Paul does not have a ginormous chin or anything. There's a paragraph describing his looks in there somewhere. ^^;;

YES to a, b, and c. ;D

[miaruma]

Ahahah, well it said he is attractive BUT WHAT DO I KNOW ABOUT ATTRACTIVE PELICANS?

also: lkdfj there has to be a timestamp later where Paul and Finch are at one of Talon and Flit's parties (which Flit forces Talon to have regularly) and they're ridiculously adorable and everyone goes O.o' when they tell that Talon brought them together :D:D:D

And I love the puns too, I'm just amazed at what you come up with :D

[ciraarana]

"I'm going to find you a birdfriend, Talon."

*falls off chair laughing and scares cats half to death* Oooh, that was hilarious! Loved the Finch toast, too!

[aggybird]

Haha, thanks. Glad you're enjoying! Say, uh, sorry to your cats for me. ;D

[karinaspellman]

AAAAAAHHHHH I READ THIS AT WORK AND IT WAS SO WORHT BEING ALMOST BUSTED EXCEPT FOR THE FACT THAT I DON'T REALLY WORK HERE I JUST SORTOF LIVE HERE IN MY FREE TIME IN BETWEEN AND AFTER CLASSES.

AHHHHHHHH ILOVELOVELOVEYOUUUUUUUUUUUU~

[aggybird]

Haha, so, apparently, you enjoyed it? XD

[karinaspellman]

YES. I'm... kind of jittery. I had this interview today that was like being INTERROGATED, which I can deal with EXCEPT THERE WERE THREE PEOPLE DOING IT. And I'm excited and nervous and talkative because I think I did okay, but they've got to pick 35 people out of the 102 that made the first, but! I am optimistic. And when I got back to a computer, I was like "Hmmm, how can I waste half an hour?" And I decided to risk LJ (Tsaiko's penis icon, anyone?) and I am so glad I did!

Talon has gotten to the mellow woobie phase you promised and I am a happy, happy puddle of fangirl. HAHA to Talon playing matchmaker. I would say he's been hanging around Flit too much BUT THERE IS NO SUCH THING. I also love how Talon's taken Flit out on, what, three dinner dates so far? And Flit hasn't noticed. Even when he slips up with "He was small like you," he doesn't get it

[karinaspellman]

P.S.,

THIS ICON YOU HAVE UPLOADED. WHUT.

[vanitylove_xx]

*SQUEE* \o/ I love how Talon is realizing that he's sort of (really really) attracted to Flit and how Flit is admitting he's in love with Talon!! I'm going to go re-read every single chapter now and flail some more over these two. :)

[aggybird]

Yes, it won't be long now! ;D Glad you enjoyed.

[tsaiko]

RIGHT. Clearly, there's something wrong with me because I never update this fast.

Clearly it is because this story is full of AWESOME and I wholey support it's continued eating of you BRAIN MEATS. Especially if it makes you update quicker.

Also I cracked up when Talon set up one of his dates with one of his other date. Then I didn't stop laughing until the end of the story. Closing the door on one of his dates? Priceless.

You are seriously distracting me from my thesis. I kind of approve after having worked on it for four hours this afternoon.

[aggybird]

Fah, I'm trying to avoid work of my own. XD

Haha, Talon is going to be so proud about getting them together. "What? Any idiot can set people up," Talon said, taking a sip of punch. "It's not like Flit's a genius or something."