Greg-the-Vampire!

[aggybird]

Dang, took me long enough. This bit goes from goofy to angsty. As always, comments/crit welcome!

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Comments

[aggybird]

Arvel is totally his ex. We first met him in Part 6, I believe.

[aggybird]

Chewing in a non-sexy way, yes. ;)

[lokiloo]

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And daaaaaaaw, Greg makes a cute uncle. I sure hope we get to see more interaction with him and the kids. <3<3<3<3

--But back to the point. YOU ARE EEEEEEEEVVIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLL. *pouts*

[aggybird]

Mua ha.

(I'm trying to push them together, doll, I really am - but thousand-year-old guys have some serious commitment issues. ;3)

Grr.

[lokiloo]

Re: Grr.

[aggybird]

Didn't I tell you? This thing is totally rated PG-13. No graphic make outs, sorry.

(There may be an optional smut scene. Mweh heh.)

[charisstoma]

*points up* what lokiloo said.
But really evil would have Luce and Arvel bidding against each other for Greg and Arvel winning. You wouldn't do that would you?

[aggybird]

Oh, of course not! ;)

[duol2fic]

:O

That is my face after reading the last line. DAMMIT. CLIFFHANGERS, I HATE THEM!

Hahaha...bat ass... *giggles* That was great. ♥

[aggybird]

I heart that line too. ;)

CLIFFHANGERS FTW.

[tomato_greens]

"You're a sick monster, but I love you."

(You're a sick, sick woman, taunting all your fans like that, but I LOVE YOU TOO. Only not quite in the same way.)

The description of Luce in the sun is just lovely, and then, of course, that leads to: "Greg thought that nothing looked as perfect as a phoenix standing in sunlight."

And the pouting, and the "I think it's cute," and Emma and Oliver and the twins and Flipper - what's his real name, anyway? - and Luce being so frustrated as to have gone to our Resident "Established Couple" for advice. Because Drake knows about the oblivious object of affection, of course. And you have made this relationship so real that I do not even mind waiting for them to get together because it is - I mean, of course, I want them to, but you have made it so realistic that half the joy is in watching them dance awkwardly around each other and the satisfaction we will get when everything finally, finally goes right.

And Arvel. I have been waiting to see what is up with him since his description first set our

[aggybird]

It's little moments of observation like that that lead to a dawning realization of Greg's feelings. I hope. ;) Trying to keep the blossoming romance between two gay monsters natural is a bit tricky. XD

I like Arveeeeel. But that's because I like total assholes. I have to remember that my characters loathe him, and they must act accordingly. Well, sort of. Heh heh. Tricksy things tend to happen with plot, on occasion.

Ha ha, what kiss scene? ;) LOL, greedy.

[tomato_greens]

I am not greedy. I am . . . enthusiastic.

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