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ageofalejandro

War Child 2/3

Oct 08, 2011 12:17

Title: War Child
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g: angst, w: tarsus, p: james t. kirk/leonard mccoy, g: h/c, s: war child, r: r, g: drama, f: star trek aos, w: violence/gore

Comments 8

romanse1 October 8 2011, 22:51:06 UTC

Oooo...I LOVE this! It IS sad and horrific for Jim. Wonderful on Bones for being such a good, understanding man. This will be interesting to see Jim get to the point where he either self-destructs or confides in Bones and gets some help.

ageofalejandro October 8 2011, 22:54:42 UTC

Thanks! :3

zhen123 October 9 2011, 17:43:38 UTC

I love this dynamic! So good and interesting!

ageofalejandro October 9 2011, 22:04:14 UTC

:D Glad you think so! I've enjoyed writing them like this, quite a lot.

bookdragon01 October 10 2011, 00:56:37 UTC

This is an intriguing a take on Tarsus I haven't seen before and your writing is great - the descriptions flow as perfectly as the dialogue.

ageofalejandro October 10 2011, 17:24:53 UTC

Thanks! :3 I've been kind of struggling with lots of this, so I'm glad to hear it's flowing well!

sayfray October 11 2011, 05:32:40 UTC

Love this, like I can't even articulate into words...

You rock!

ageofalejandro October 11 2011, 15:43:19 UTC

Thanks! :3 I'm glad you like it, Say.