Comments | ageofalejandro: Los Angeles

ageofalejandro

Los Angeles

Jun 05, 2011 21:08

Title: Los Angeles
Rating: T for swearing, I suppose.
Fandom: STxi
Beta: hyde_the_body
Genre: angsty, romance
Disclaimer: I need one. This should tell you something.
A/n: from June 4, 2011's DCaDD at jim_and_bones and edited since initial posting. Also, I genuinely love LA.
Summary: an uncomfortable conversation and getting lost. And then Jim talks to someone important. :)

( Things that everyone knows about LA: fifty percent of the population is ninety percent plastic, movie stars live there, and it's weird. )

g: angst, r: t, fic: oneshot, p: james t. kirk/leonard mccoy, i ♥ la, comm: jim and bones, comment fic, f: star trek aos, g: fluff, g: romance

Comments 10

shameless_klutz June 6 2011, 12:45:46 UTC

Love. Love. Love this!!!! The description of LA was beautifully done. Thanks for sharing!!

ageofalejandro June 6 2011, 20:13:27 UTC

Thanks! :D Glad you think I did so well with LA.

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ageofalejandro June 6 2011, 20:15:36 UTC

:D You should totally go! It's fucking awesome and surreal and weird. Last time I was there, there were two giant with the same name within walking distance of each other and the waitress at the Red Robin's we went to looked like she stepped out of Clueless and there was some guy walking around with a bubble gun. It was pretty great. :)

And thanks!

secretsolitaire June 7 2011, 00:18:40 UTC

I like this! I could picture LA quite vividly.

ageofalejandro June 7 2011, 00:36:56 UTC

Thanks!

january_snow July 8 2011, 19:20:15 UTC

have been to LA all of once and loved it real hard.

this evoked it all, especially as i travelled a lot by bus.

ageofalejandro July 8 2011, 20:46:54 UTC

Thanks! Glad to know I'm not the only one who likes even the seedy parts of LA. :D

bookdragon01 September 16 2011, 11:47:15 UTC

Your description of LA is absolutely gorgeous, just like the rest of this piece.

ageofalejandro September 16 2011, 11:48:25 UTC

Thanks! :) Glad you enjoyed it! I think that's one of my all-time favorite bits of anything I've ever written, so I'm glad you thought it was well done.