My impressions: This reminds me of the movie Memento, so I am assuming the every two weeks references some sort of transient amnesia? Of course, the mystery lies in what has caused the amnesia--if that's even what it is! I like that Pascal keeps notes to help himself remember. That's a very Pascal thing to do. :)
The other thing that occurs to me is that it is a recurring dream of events yet to take place. That would explain why the handwriting in the journal is different--since people often have trouble reading in dreams. Anyway, I'm just throwing out immediate impressions that are probably wrong, but I like the sense of unreality and foreboding you've created.
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The other thing that occurs to me is that it is a recurring dream of events yet to take place. That would explain why the handwriting in the journal is different--since people often have trouble reading in dreams. Anyway, I'm just throwing out immediate impressions that are probably wrong, but I like the sense of unreality and foreboding you've created.
I'm looking forward to part two. :)
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