Audrey through the eyes of Jack
anonymous
July 15 2014, 05:05:00 UTC
To Agentrez I loved what you have written on Audrey and hope you will, no I am actually asking, please write something similar to rectify this horrible finale they've done of "24" LAD. Re-write the ending completely please, what these writers did tonight borders on being heresy! Write it right! Kate gets rid of the 2nd shooter before he can shoot Audrey. Audrey lives, Heller and V.P.together create a shared pardon which absolves Jack of any action and all fall out from what he had to do S8 because of the treason committed by President Taylor also for the heroic work of getting Chang for voice and facial recognition.
For Agent Rez
anonymous
July 15 2014, 05:24:11 UTC
Hi there, Really love what you're written here. On the other blog I followed the dialogue between you a Mary and loved what was shared and I went so far as to print some of it out so I could read it again more thoughtfully. I also would like to continue to follow your thoughts here and am not sure how to do that.. While you may not agree to wanting that when I tell you who I am; please know some of what I shared on the 24 blog with regards to some of those who were there blogging was done to see reactions of how open were they if your/ones thoughts were different than theirs. You and Mary were willing to stand you point and yet also listen which is appreciated. I am Lady J If you're interested and can let me know through here or the 24 blog I will share with you my real name and how you can find me on Facebook.
Re: For Agent Rez
anonymous
July 15 2014, 15:58:09 UTC
You can find me on Facebook as my given name Judy Hendrixon, most of my posts are open to the public. Do a friend request and that will get you in. Also my personal email: jhendrixon43@gmail.com
I am a writer also mostly personal so I haven't tried to get published because then they own the work and can do what they want to it.
By personal I mean I've written a book about the horrific vehicle accident I was in at the beginning of 2000 involving 2 18 wheel trucks, an out of body experience, and 4 months in the hospital, 3 major surgeries, and two years of painful rehab learning to walk again.
Others about my national travels for several years doing "Story Telling" about women of the Bible, my experiences as a volunteer with the local animal shelter socialing feral cats which is where I am going right now. Blessings on you and your writings. Judy
Really wonderful
anonymous
July 20 2014, 18:49:27 UTC
I'm not usually an avid fan-fiction reader (because the writing quality can vary so much), but this was outstanding. You capture the Jack and Audrey relationship beautifully, and I'm really hoping you'll find a way to continue their story apart from the way 24:LAD left it. Jack and Audrey deserve a happier ending, and I would love to see your take on it if you get the chance.
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Really love what you're written here. On the other blog I followed the dialogue between you a Mary and loved what was shared and I went so far as to print some of it out so I could read it again more thoughtfully. I also would like to continue to follow your thoughts here and am not sure how to do that.. While you may not agree to wanting that when I tell you who I am; please know some of what I shared on the 24 blog with regards to some of those who were there blogging was done to see reactions of how open were they if your/ones thoughts were different than theirs. You and Mary were willing to stand you point and yet also listen which is appreciated. I am Lady J
If you're interested and can let me know through here or the 24 blog I will share with you my real name and how you can find me on Facebook.
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I am a writer also mostly personal so I haven't tried to get published because then they own the work and can do what they want to it.
By personal I mean I've written a book about the horrific vehicle accident I was in at the beginning of 2000 involving 2 18 wheel trucks, an out of body experience, and 4 months in the hospital, 3 major surgeries, and two years of painful rehab learning to walk again.
Others about my national travels for several years doing "Story Telling" about women of the Bible, my experiences as a volunteer with the local animal shelter socialing feral cats which is where I am going right now. Blessings on you and your writings. Judy
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