Fanfic: "Some Pretty Bad Things" Chapter 4

[agentrez]

Title: “Some Pretty Bad Things”
Author: AgentRez
Rating: T
Characters: Jack and Tony are the main characters. Bill, Chloe, and Renee play minor roles for now...other characters possibly coming later.
Warnings: Spoilers for those who are behind on season 7, some foul language
Summary: The back-story of what Tony’s been up to since we thought he was

Comments

[cybertoothtiger]

I'm liking this. You really have Tony's voice down well. I'll be honest with you and say that the formatting makes it hard to read. What if you just put in the sub-titles with the 'flashback to X' and then had it in regular type?