Fic: Empire State of Mind - Chapter 11: Head. Ache.

[agentb81]

Title:  Empire State of Mind - Chapter 11: Head. Ache.
Author: agentb81
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Brittany/Santana
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5500
Disclaimer: Glee is copyrighted and belongs to the creators and Fox. As this work is an interpretation of the original material and not for-profit, it constitutes fair use. Use of other personalities is not a

Comments

[agentb81]

Moi!? I am so sorry! But I'm happy you don't hate me :)

And you, you are too kind with your words, you're making me blush.

I am sneaky, I like to keep people guessing, it keeps me guessing too and is so much fun :D

Really pleased you liked it, thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Next chapter is up now! Yay!

[wkgreen]

Okay, Puck needs a headslap! Although he might not have realized that Brittany went to Santana's. But, it is Puck, so a head slap. ;)

Waiting for more :)

[agentb81]

Yep he does, you might wanna slap Puck in the next chapter too, but I'll leave that one up to you ;)

More is here, go check it out and thank you so much for always taking the time to comment :D

[startled_always]

Great chapter. Even though I knew Brittany was actually ok, I felt the tension and the suspence. Poor Santana, beside herself with worry.

I love how you create the contrast between Santana, the tough boss and no-bullshit chef and the caring loving girlfriend.

Really liked the phone converstaion between Santana and Brittany's dad.

Quinn cracked me up in this chapter.

This is such a charming and enjoyable story and has been since the first chapter. Can't wait to read the rest of it.

<3

[agentb81]

Well hello Ms Frog.

Santana is a complex character, but I love writing her many sides, keeps it fresh :)

I think the phone convo was my fave in this chapter, that and Britt opening Santana's apartment door :)

Thank you soooooo much my dear, I'm always appreciative of your support <3

[sgafirenity]

OMG! You are evil. From the last chapter I figured it was Brittany that was injured. I was on the edge of my seat waiting for Santana to find her and then Puck calls and all Brittany had was a MIGRAINE! Evil. You really know how to write so convincing that it seems like something it's not. Very nice.

I did however love that Brittany was in Santana's apartment. So cute. That bit with the fork was hilarious. I also quite liked the part where Quinn said that Kurt isn't gonna like that dent so much. I'm guessing that was Kurt's locker. :P

I can't wait to see where you take this next. :D

[agentb81]

Evil? Me? I can't hurt Brittany too much, but to be fair, migraines are serious stuff!! And thanks, I like sending people one way then twisting it another, so yes, I guess I am evil ;)

Yep the bit at San's apartment I think was my fave :)

And yes, Santana punched Kurt's locker lol

Next chapter is up, so please go read :) And thank you for the comment!

[sgafirenity]

Yes, you are definitely evil. I do agree about migraines though. They sure are terrible.

I can't wait to read Kurt's reaction to the fact that his locker has a big dent in it now.

[1shinyboat]

*wipes brow*

Okay, you're forgiven.

Thanks for the update. Nice job and next chapter, please.

[agentb81]

why thank you very much!

You're welcome, pleased you like it and next chapter is now up, I'm sorry for the wait.