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Fic: A Sense of Deja Vu - Part 9/9

Jan 01, 2010 17:54

Title: A Sense of Deja Vu 9/9
Author: agentb81
Fandom: Law and Order: SVU & Grey’s Anatomy - crossover
Pairing: Olivia/Alex & Izzie/Addison
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything.
Summary: Set in NY, two old friends, Alex and Addison, find it difficult to communicate their feelings to their respective crushes. Multi chapter fic.
Spoilers: ( Read more... )

a sense of deja vu, svu, izzie/addison, grey's anatomy, olivia/alex

Comments 20

Great Job! silkpoet January 1 2010, 20:54:19 UTC

OHHHHHHH, Truly, I really enjoyed the way you handled the story. I liked the easy flow of the story, it's cadence. There were no complicated plot twists or too much angst. It's simplicity of the language and the easy banter between the characters was really enjoyable and caught my attention since the beginning and left me with a gratifying feeling now that is over (sigh).

Thank you for sharing it and if it's not too much to ask could you please write a sequel?

Please?

Happy New year 2010

V

Re: Great Job! agentb81 January 2 2010, 10:10:14 UTC

Wow, thank you so much for the kind words. I try to keep it focused and develop the relationship of the characters and if that's working then I'm really pleased.

As for a sequel? Hmmm, I will have to see what I can do!

Thanks again and a Happy New Year to you too :)

on_directing January 1 2010, 21:12:26 UTC

I've taken great pleasure in reading this unusual crossover story and wanted to thank you for sharing it. I'm looking forward to read more of your work.

May the new year be a great one for you :)

agentb81 January 2 2010, 09:56:25 UTC

I'm really pleased you've enjoyed it, thank you for taking the time to read and comment, it's greatly appreciated.

Happy New Year :)

ttandme69 January 1 2010, 22:55:21 UTC

squeee...so glad to see the update...u could have told me!!! loved it...cannot wait 2 c what u have in store for us now??? Lisa

agentb81 January 2 2010, 09:57:19 UTC

I sent you a message, did you not get it!? Bummer! Anyway, glad you liked it, I'll have to make a decision on what to do next!

authorw January 2 2010, 01:52:02 UTC

This was a perfect ending! A pity it had to end! Please do a sequel or another story!
I love all the emotions that came out at dinner!

agentb81 January 2 2010, 09:59:12 UTC

Aw thanks, dinner I think was a great way to end it with them all together and I'm really pleased the emotions worked, it came to a natural conclusion. I'll have to think about a sequel . . . and just out of curiosity are you a A/O or I/A shipper?

jt4702 January 2 2010, 05:15:31 UTC

*sighs happily* What a wonderful surprise to see a new chapter. I am just a bit bummed out that it's over. I have loved this from beginning to end. I loved the the pace you set in the story, and how you developed the plot. The switching between both couples was done very smoothly. Nothing felt out of place. I loved how it was such an easy decision for Izzie to move to NYC. I loved how Addison made it so clear she did not want to spend another second apart from Izzie. I was going Awww and squeeing like a schoolgirl during that whole scene. The dinner was great. The way Alex just blurted out she loved Olivia had me giggling, and of course, the initial fear of the meeting was so cute, and re-assuring Addie was so sweet... Thank you so much for writing and sharing. Perhaps now I can convince/bribe you into continuing "Private Dancer"? I know. I am bad. Bad me... all kidding aside, I have truly enjoyed your writing, and I can't wait for more.

Hope you had a wonderful start to 2010.

agentb81 January 2 2010, 10:02:09 UTC

Thank you for all of your detailed comments, I've really appreciated them and the time you've taken to R&R. I'll let you in on a little secret, I have been reading Private Dancer to try and remember what's happened! It'll be hard to get back into the flow, but I do have the intention of finishing it off, so don't worry!

Happy New Year :)