Fic: Sparky - Touch

Feb 02, 2006 15:15



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fic, sga

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_atmospheric February 1 2006, 21:17:30 UTC
Squeee! I love the imagery this has- perfect.

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agent_sydney February 1 2006, 22:23:01 UTC
Thanks!

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dark_cygnet February 2 2006, 00:07:51 UTC
Nice job with the imagery. i liked this alot. The only thing i noticed was this...

No one else tares at her so completely.

I think you want tears instead.

Great job, thanks for sharing.

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agent_sydney February 2 2006, 02:33:10 UTC
:D You're welcome!

Thanks for the correction!

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vickysg1 February 2 2006, 00:41:23 UTC
Sweet!!

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agent_sydney February 2 2006, 01:30:43 UTC
Thanks very much!

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liliumscribe February 2 2006, 01:52:53 UTC
Very poetic... Erotic without being overdone... Strangely poignant.

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agent_sydney February 2 2006, 02:34:58 UTC
Wow, thank you!

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