Firefly Fanfiction: "Forgive"

[agent_omega]

As always, thanks for reading and reviewing.

Comments

[xfirefly9x]

Beautiful. Angsty, heart-aching and the ending is absolutely perfect.

Then, before either knows what has transpired, they drift back together in a mutual kiss which burns with more passion than he has ever felt for another woman, and more love than she has ever felt for another man.

I love it. ♥

[gilliebeans]

I am so, so glad you posted this here. I remember it from another site and reading it here reminds me of why I love it so much. For all the carefully constructed parallels on so many levels of this moment, the work doesn't show - just the beauty. All of the subtle but very specific references to their shared history, the language, the seamless transitions from prose to poetry and back, sigh and sigh again.

[blaidd_drwg_7]

I love the switch in perspectives, the detail, the wryness, the sadness, and the sweetness.

You are monarch of headers!!

[stop_theworld]

This is absolute perfection. You've got them. You've got their words, their feelings, their hurt and their love. Beautiful.

[miss_bushido]

The switch in perspectives was great. This was very sweet, and I loved how you described the kiss at the end.