Fic: "Balancing Act" (5/8) (Doctor/Donna, Doctor Who)

[ageless_aislynn]

Title: "Balancing Act" (5/8)
Author: ageless_aislynn
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Ten/Donna
Summary: Donna has managed to save both herself and her memories but in doing so, has she bitten off more than she...and the Doctor...can chew? An alternate end to "Journey's End."
Rating: NC-17
Length: 2,816
Spoilers: Up to 4x13 "Journey's End"
Disclaimer: Not mine

Comments

[kwiknkleen]

Actually, and I know I am going to be the weird one here, I loved the comedy of them trying to get out of their clothes. Adding to that the stickyness of ice cream made for great reading.

[ageless_aislynn]

Well, I for one am glad to hear you enjoyed the whole comedy aspect, lol! ;) I've been definitely trying for a balance between hopefully funny and sexy and so I'm really happy to hear you're enjoying the comedy side, too! :D Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :D ♥!

[time_converges]

Oh, my. I definitely need some ice cream.
Another wonderful chapter, and worth the wait. :D

[ageless_aislynn]

Awwww, thanks so much! Yep, I really wanted everybody to have a definite ice cream craving after this! *adjusts halo* ;) And isn't cannibalcake's icon just perfect for this chapter? :D I couldn't believe it when I saw it a few weeks back, like it was practically tailor-made for this, lol! :D

Thanks again so much! Very much appreciated! :D *hugs* ♥!

[lounge_lily]

"If I smother here," she said, gasping for breath, "don't tell people how I died. Make up something heroic, hm?"

Hysterical! And once again, great dialogue and fun, hot, real sex. You made my day. Thanks.

[ageless_aislynn]

Aw and you totally made my day with your kind comment! I really am SO glad to hear that not only is the sex fun and hot but that it comes across as real as well! *happy dances* Thanks so very much! ♥♥♥!!!

[starxd_sparrow]

*glee!*

Yet another fantastic installment, dear! By turns hawt and funny - you're doing one heck of a job with this. I loved: "What?" he said, looking at her with ice cream smeared all over his face and with the gobsmacked expression of someone who had just gotten an unexpected glimpse of nirvana.

I'll be happy to see the final chapter, but I'm already missing the story!

[ageless_aislynn]

*glee!* Thank you SO much! ♥! I really, really appreciate your lovely comment! :D And I'm glad you liked that particular line -- that was one of those moments I could just see, lol! ;)

You know, I'm going to miss this story, too! :( It's been fun "hanging out" with mating!bonded!Ten/Donna! ;) Thanks again! ♥!

[robi_travels]

Please keep this writing up, I am so loving this!

Thank you.

[ageless_aislynn]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading and commenting! :D ♥!