[fic] Don't open your eyes until I count to seven

May 30, 2009 05:30

Title: Don't open your eyes until I count to seven

Pairing(s): JaeHo
Length: One-shot
Word count: 3900~
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Smut
Warnings: Jae tops. (And I still feel silly for putting this in the warnings, but you never know.)
Notes: I'm back to posting after months of absence, and apparently my writing skills didn't take them very well. To my ( Read more... )

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age_of_dreams May 30 2009, 12:03:09 UTC
Thank you!!!! :D♥♥♥♥♥

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o0kamiyani0o May 30 2009, 06:11:13 UTC
Fucking hot!!!! i couldn't believe i just read this... this... tortured my brain!! *calls avex for a yunjae live action of this* lol.... how i wish i can hire you to write me smuts more. lol... but i'd probably dead just the thought of it. btw... this really is hot, bb! xD

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age_of_dreams May 30 2009, 12:04:55 UTC
Ahhh, don't we all wish for a live action of that :P

I'm glad you liked the fic x3♥

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chloe1910 May 30 2009, 06:17:30 UTC
This is so god damn smexy, Simona ah...you really got me all hot and bothered..especially at Yunho's dancing scene...*dues*

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age_of_dreams May 30 2009, 12:06:58 UTC
I'm happy you enjoyed it ♥ Especially cause the dance scene was a bitch to write and I'm still kind of ":|" over it, so your comment is very much appreciated ;-;♥

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blinkable May 30 2009, 06:36:40 UTC
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The whole pole parading of the Ho

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age_of_dreams May 30 2009, 12:08:05 UTC
...is something that he should totally do for the fans at least once T^T

:D♥♥♥

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blinkable May 30 2009, 13:56:39 UTC
uhm i know how fans feel but for me...this should be exclusive for jae only ;p

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machine_of_july May 30 2009, 07:17:46 UTC
Ougad it's now 3:00 am AND MY PC FROZE IN THE MIDDLE OF READING THIS DHF;IDSUHFLSDIUFHSDGFSDF WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

Anyways, sdflsdsdhlfusdfsdhhlfshd lmfao LMFAO WHEN DID YOU GET SO RETARDED? he beginning was cute, of course that sucker Yunho took the bait. And I saw that ninja!YooMin with the ramen aww ♥ And I LOLed irl at the so-called “in depth investigation” cries why are they such losers?

BUT ANYWAYS HOLY SHIT HOLY FUCKING SHIT I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY DID THE CLUB THING HOLY SHIT HOLY FUCKING SHIT AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH BRB FLYING TO ITALY TO THANK YOU MYSEEEEEELLLLLFFFFFFFF AHHHHHHH FRONT ROW SHDFJDSFSDFL YUNHO IN A SUIT IS TOO MUCH HDFHSDFH YUNHO RIDING JAE AHHHHHH YES

AHHHHH YUNHO PLEASE STRIP FOREVER AND EVER

I love you.

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age_of_dreams May 30 2009, 12:17:04 UTC
LMAO YOUR LAPTOP HATES THIS TOO XDDDDDDDDD

I've always been retarded when it comes to DBSK XD doesn't it showsssss xD Though I can't decide if you mean it as a good or a ba thing D: *runs in circles*

Ahhh, the Yoomin ♥ I was wondering if someone was going to see it, lol x3

THAT'S WHAT I MEANT WHEN I SAID THAT IT WAS ALL YOUR FAULT FOR PUTTING IDEAS IN MY MIND XDDDDD THEY ALWAYS EAT MY BRAIN ALIVE AND I HAVE TO WRITE THEM EVEN WHEN I LACK THE SKILLS TO MAKE THEM REALLY SEXY U.U;;

HELL YES ♥

I love you too XD♥

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age_of_dreams May 30 2009, 12:19:00 UTC
doesn't it show*

CRIES FOREVER WHERE DID MY GRAMMAR GO ;______;

(and these are the times when I wish I had a paid account, lol XD)

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machine_of_july May 30 2009, 21:28:07 UTC
LMFAO ♥

yeah having a paid account wouldn't be a "ba" thing i think :PPPP

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