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kittlewit in agatheringlight

This Little Heart Of Mine

Jun 12, 2009 22:08

Title: This little heart of mine
Author: Kittlewit
Length: Oneshot - just over 10 pages
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Yunjae
Summary: Jaejoong fell madly in love with Yunho three years ago. But three years ago, Yunho left, not knowing Jaejoong's feelings towrads him. Now, Yunho is back. But he's not teh Yunho Jaejoong remembers.
( After three longs years of waiting, Jaejoong finally got to see Yunho again )

yunjae, oneshot

Comments 17

simply_junsu June 13 2009, 03:39:02 UTC

Ugh, Yunho!!
He deserves a kick in the gut for treating Jae like that!!

Jae just loves him so very much...

ayufreya June 13 2009, 04:06:49 UTC

that was really cute :P

Yunho was a conceited bastard at the beginning, but the ending made it all better :D LOVED the Yunjae at the end *O*

Write more, and thanks for the great writing :D

gapo24 June 13 2009, 05:18:32 UTC

spot! i'll be back to read dem

simply_yunjae June 13 2009, 06:04:39 UTC

well pretty much everyone said what i was going to say xD
I'm going to mem this , so nicely written (:

moonkissedx June 13 2009, 08:24:18 UTC

this was nice! :D
I felt my heart slowly breaking when I read about yunho's actions last time.
he was totally acting like a jerk. D':
but yay, they made up in the end and that was quite a nice ending :)
very sweet, and yunho changed!
I think that sohee girl was really... I don't know, I just don't like her xD
but they broke up and that was awesome lol.
overall, I really enjoyed this! <3