[ JongKey ] The Trouble with Boys ( Part 1/2 )

[agapic]

Title: The Trouble with Boys (1/2)
Rating: PG-13/R
Word Count: ~5,800
Pairing: Jonghyun x Key
Genre: Drama, romance, some fluff
Warnings: A lot of cursing, some slight sexual situations
Summary: Key wants to confess, but can’t. The fact that the rest of SHINee won’t stop interfering in matters really doesn’t help. At all.
Notes: I apologize for the length

Comments

[nuile]

I LOVE it!!
Key being Key and overreacting, Jjong being... well... Jjong xDD It's the best!
And Key's feelings are so intense I can almost taste them *_*
Very well-written!!
I wonder what Jonghyun will about it all now that he knows *_* (I hope, something crazy xD)

Thank you, and I just can't wait to see the second part *____*

[agapic]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing them too because they're best friends but they seem like they'd argue lots when it came to their romantic relationship :P

Thank you for reading!! :)

[agapic]

I think the Onkey scene in here was my favourite to write. Jinki is too adorable. I want to squeeze him and take him home with me and fill my life with dubutastic fail. And YES. Key is so a high school girl sometimes. Hell, he's just a GIRL. And if he's not a girl he's got to be the gayest boy I have ever seen because it's like BLATANT. I feel like Taemin's manlier than him somtimes ;__;

Thank you very much for reading! I'm glad you liked~

[agapic]

NO I HAVEN'T SEEN THAT BUT I WANT TO. OMG I WANT TO. Well at least Key's aware of the fact that he occasionally acts like a pubescent girl. Gotta love his hormonal attitude sometimes. ILU KEY ♥

And haha, I remember laughing when Taemin was having that cross-dressing showdown with Dongho and he was all like "I dun want to be a pretty girl, I want to be a man ;____;" And I laughed because it was like, sorry dear, but you're probably prettier than I am. ):

[agapic]

Haha! Thank you~ I am glad you enjoyed it! I haven't started on chapter two yet but I have it outlined and I have all the major plot points down (because I'm an OCD writer that way). I'm going to update my Onkey fic first. Which I am excited about writing because there will be Onkey smut! YAY *shot*

[intricateorchid]

I liked this!
I think you pinpointed their character really well. :)
LOL. HORMONAL KEY. I LOVE YOU. Buahaha, Taemin, Minho, and Onew. Evil masterminds. (Even though Taemin does most of the work in setting Key up with Jonghyun).

JONGHYUN. You better not like boobs. Other than mine. HAHAHA -shot- But Key's better. A lottt better.

But I really liked it! It has angst, humor, fluff, and inappropriate comments all balled up in one. FRIKKEN GOOD, my dear. REALLY FRIKKEN GOOD. ♥ I think what really grabbed me the most was the fact that Key came out to the band members. Someone needs to write about that. xD

ANYWAY. Update as fast as you can! ;D
And thanks for writing and sharing with us! ♥

[agapic]

Thank you! And yes. Hormonal Key. Only he can be such a woman and such a boy at the same time. I LOVE HIM SO MUCH OMG /bias

And hahaha, can you imagine how Key's coming out scene would go down?

key: guys I'm gay.
minho: hn.
taemin: thank you captain obvious.
onew: O RLY
jjong: no boobs for you?

... I don't know what that was. I apologize.

ANYWAY, thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it! :) And you should write more too, your JongKey was AWESOME

[intricateorchid]

SAME HERE. I have such a big Key bias, it's not even funny. I swear I stalk him or something. If he found out, then BAM. Restraining order.

LOL. VERY TRUE. I can just imagine that happening.
I think Onew would overreact the most. Not because it's bad or something, but because it's... well... Onew. LOL.

Bah, don't flatter me. Yours is tons better. Even now, I'm still picking out flaws in mine. xD
Keep on writing, my dear! :)

[hikasai]

Ah, I loved this so much! :DD
I liked the way you made their characters, I think they really fit :]
Oh, poor Key, keeping his feelings in like that and having to deal with a clueless Jonghyun lol♥
Poor Onew too, being the leader at times like these :D
I adore Angst fics so much♥

I wonder what Jonghyun's answer will be! can't wait for the next part :) Thank you for writing and sharing this! ~~

[agapic]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And yes, Jjong just seemed like a typical clueless boy to me. I love him. ;__;

Thanks for the review~!