Comments | agapi42: Just Passing Through, PG, 540 words

agapi42

Just Passing Through, PG, 540 words

Feb 09, 2009 04:46

Title: Just Passing Through
Characters: Ian, Barbara
Rating: PG
Word count: 540
Summary: I will lead you back.
Notes: Many thanks to purple_bug for betaing!

( Just Passing Through )

fandom: doctor who, fic, ship: ian/barbara, character: barbara wright, character: ian chesterton, challenge: fanfic100

Comments 11

paranoidangel42 February 9 2009, 16:00:27 UTC

Aw. It's so typical of Ian that he would throw himself in front of a poison dart and so sweet that Barbara needs him.

agapi42 February 10 2009, 21:20:53 UTC

:) I'm glad you liked it.

oltha_heri February 9 2009, 22:36:15 UTC

Oh Ian, he so would do this, and then Barbara would so reprimand him.

This was really painfully sweet and in character.

agapi42 February 10 2009, 21:27:13 UTC

Thank you!

And it's always lovely to be complimented on characterisation as it's often one of my biggest worries.

kb91 February 10 2009, 05:17:49 UTC

Absolutely lovely and powerful. I could see the whole scene unfolding. Well done. :)

agapi42 February 10 2009, 21:28:22 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

fourzoas February 10 2009, 23:01:06 UTC

Oh, just lovely! The imagery is great, and the "conversation" is very sweet.

agapi42 February 14 2009, 06:32:50 UTC

Thank you! That's great to know.

spaciireth February 12 2009, 01:56:04 UTC

Awww! That was incredibly lovely!

agapi42 February 14 2009, 06:34:18 UTC

Thank you :)