Leaving Footprints, G, 491 words

Jan 09, 2009 03:07

Title: Leaving Footprints
Characters: Ian, Barbara
Rating: G
Word count: 491
Summary: History is so many small steps.
Notes: Written for livii for fandom_stocking. Many thanks to purple_bug for betaing.

Leaving Footprints )

fandom: doctor who, fic, ship: ian/barbara, character: barbara wright, character: ian chesterton, challenge: fanfic100

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tigerkat24 January 9 2009, 03:47:04 UTC
Wow, this is lovely! I love how you've connected the moon landing with everything they went through, and the last line is simply beautiful. Plus, yanno, this paragraph is great: "They have a brief dispute over whether a historic event that knows perfectly well it’s a historic event is pretentious and whether this first step onto an alien surface might be forgotten relatively quickly; the significance overshadowed by the time when space travel will be commonplace."

Brava!

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agapi42 January 17 2009, 13:21:22 UTC
Thank you!

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infiniteviking January 9 2009, 05:17:24 UTC
That's marvelous. Really, really marvelous... bittersweet and infinite like all the best moments are.

So many short steps away.

Beautiful.

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agapi42 January 17 2009, 13:22:14 UTC
:D I'm delighted you liked it!

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paranoidangel42 January 10 2009, 09:31:45 UTC
I love the idea of Ian & Barbara watching the moon landings, which of course they would, but this is just how I could see them being about it.

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agapi42 January 17 2009, 13:23:27 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad it worked for you.

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minerva_fan January 13 2009, 02:05:04 UTC
Oh, man, how beautiful is this??

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agapi42 January 17 2009, 13:26:35 UTC
Thank you very much :D

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