Limited Perception, PG, 510 words

[agapi42]

Title: Limited Perception
Characters: Ian, Barbara, the Rani
Rating: PG
Word count: 510
Summary: Humans have only five senses.

Comments

[ghost2]

I like how you have a section for each of the senses. That format works really well. One of my favorite lines:

The Doctor’s moral outrage would be tiresome, and the Master would compliment her and steal it.

Too true!

[agapi42]

Thanks! I'm not sure how well it all works together (despite reassurances), so it's nice to hear that at least the format does.

[livii]

I'm awfully late getting to this, but I really liked it - lovely portrayals of Ian and Barbara, with a great little overarching plot as well! Lovely work.

[agapi42]

I'm awfully late replying, but thank you!