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Anywhere

Jan 11, 2011 05:51

Tim’s entire family is excited. They’re talking loud and congratulating each other. But they should be. He just got drafted to the Denver Bronco’s. And Tim’s excited too. Except he’s trying to figure out where Riley will end up. Denver made a deal with him: if they drafted him, they’d draft Riley too. Except Tim didn’t expect them to pick up ( Read more... )

raiting: nc:17, football!slash, pairing: coobow

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darkeyedresolve January 11 2011, 20:00:27 UTC

I actually think this is a pretty great piece of work. I definitely like the characterization of Tebow with that naivety and adorable qualities. I thought you did a good job with a mixture of their personalities and how they work as a couple.

Nice work.

chase_acow January 11 2011, 22:38:27 UTC

All right. First-time is totally a red hot kink for me, but I also really enjoyed the characterization that you gave the boys. I don't know much about them either, but this had me hooked reading to the end. : ) Thank you for sharing!

nyychick23513 January 13 2011, 01:23:54 UTC

Awww, first-time Timmy. Definitely a favorite of mine. ^_^ This was really interesting just because of the differences in the way you characterized the boys and the way my Tim and Riley muses are, hee. And I loved that you didn't just ignore their families, especially since Tim's is such a huge part of his life. The way Riley keeps having to make sure Tim's okay with it SO rings true to me, and I loved that. Nice job. :)

gayalithiel January 14 2011, 13:19:27 UTC

I really enjoyed reading this- love me some Timmy and Riley! And it was HOT! Thanks so much for sharing it.