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redorchids June 26 2009, 20:17:15 UTC
I really liked this. Good joncer dynamic. Really like Brendon in his role as well. A very nice read.

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afterthefair June 26 2009, 23:55:34 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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lovelypoet June 27 2009, 00:22:30 UTC
So, Ryan and I were listening to Pet Sounds and we had the 'needs more theremin' conversation again

I hate you. I hate you. I hate you. I hate you.

Seriously, do you even understand how hard this line made me laugh? I SNORTED, okay. Because it's just THERE, tucked into the middle of the rest of this completely awesome story and it almost BROKE me.

Fucking theremin.

And oh my god, your Ryan. I mean, obviously your Jon and Spencer and Brendon are awesome, but YOUR RYAN. OH MY GOD.

Why do you have the flu? I want to flail at you in person about this and you're being all dumb and feverridden and stuff.

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afterthefair June 27 2009, 01:18:12 UTC
Thank you, sweetie! And you know all theremin mentions are in honor of you.

And, ugh, why am I stuck here sick? I'm going to go take another nap.

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afterthefair June 29 2009, 20:45:28 UTC
Thank you! I'm really interested in how to make Jon/Spencer work the changing dynamics, so I'm happy this idea worked for you.

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theswearingkind June 27 2009, 04:42:37 UTC
I really loved this. I loved the fights that didn't end in huge screaming matches and huge crying jags and how they seem like actual guys in their early twenties. And I really liked how - kind of quiet it is, how possible it feels.

Congratulations on a great story, and thanks for sharing!

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afterthefair June 29 2009, 20:47:30 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm constantly worried about fight scenes ringing true, so I appreciate the feedback.

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clumsygyrl June 27 2009, 04:53:00 UTC
still as good this time around. :)

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afterthefair June 29 2009, 20:48:12 UTC
♥♥♥

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