Fic: Act As If (2/2)

Jun 15, 2008 23:35

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ext_63023 June 16 2008, 08:31:30 UTC
Ohhhhhhhh. Loveliness. The wine country was an excellent choice; that sort of easy-going atmosphere permeates every part of your story. Well-done, and I love your characterizations.

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afterthefair June 17 2008, 00:17:56 UTC
Thank you so much!

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brandixcyanide June 16 2008, 08:36:43 UTC
i just. oh, ryan.

The dynamic in this is absolutely amazing, between Spencer and Ryan and the whole band, really. I don't know if you meant to write it that way or if it was intentional, but there's a focus on Ryan's sleeping patterns with Spencer that for some reason completely made me melt. IDEK anymore.

I'd have more to say, but i'm extremely sleep deprived. *g*

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afterthefair June 17 2008, 00:18:51 UTC
It's great that you caught the sleeping thing. Thanks for commenting!

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fledmusic June 16 2008, 08:43:08 UTC
This is beautiful. I was so excited when I saw this fic posted, because I absolutely adore Ryan/Spencer, and there is not nearly enough of it.

Just everything about this fic, Ryan and Spencer's relationship, how comfortable they are with each other, how becoming romantically involved is so easy that it's almost TOO easy for Ryan to accept it, and how Spencer knows exactly what he's doing and what he wants the entire time...it's all so perfect and lovely and I'm sort of choked up a little.

“Spence? Hey, like, this? This whole thing? It was a good idea.” He burrows closer to Spencer, thankful for the dark. I love that line.

Thank you so much for writing this, I love it. I'm glad I stayed up to read. ♥

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afterthefair June 17 2008, 00:20:15 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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nova33 June 16 2008, 08:50:45 UTC
I really love this! I always thought that the switch from friends to something-more-than-friends would be hard for Ryan and Spencer, but especially Ryan. The way you showed his insecurities about the whole thing, his doubts and the way he was always questioning every moved just seemed very...Ryan to me. I'm glad they ended up the way they did, and how their relationship can just be easy. Great fic! (Oh, also - I really loved your Brendon, what few bits we got of him. He was the perfect mix of energetic and thoughtful.)

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afterthefair June 17 2008, 00:21:50 UTC
Thank you for commenting! It's great that Ryan rang true for you.

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maggiebloome June 16 2008, 10:38:41 UTC
Awwww. That was so sweet! Silly Ryan, Spencer knows best :P

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afterthefair June 17 2008, 00:22:25 UTC
Thanks!

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