Colors (more than shades of grey)

[afrakaday]

Title:  Colors (more than shades of grey)
Rating: M
Word count: 300

Comments

[defyingnormalcy]

I really love how you used each colour to evoke such passionate, strong, visceral emotions. I also so loved how you used opposite colours to name the actual colour of the words. Very clever. The art at the close is stunning, I presume this was your source of inspiration? :)

[afrakaday]

Thanks for lovin' on my little drab! I didn't see this exact piece, but a bunch of similar Johns pieces on Friday. Definitely inspiring! :)

[missbevcrusher]

This was so neat! Very creative. Well done!

[afrakaday]

Thanks! I can't make art but I sure do love letting it move me...to write fic, lol.

[urania16]

The way you use those colors to paint a scene, give us a sense of emotions bubbling in that room, while passion heatens between Bill and Laura.
One word, perfect.

[afrakaday]

Thanks so much for this kind comment. :) I'm happy these primary colors evoked strong feelings.

[newnumbertwo]

I love this! Especially the last line. It made me feel all the feels. *shippy sigh*

♥ ♥ ♥

[afrakaday]

Yay shippy feeeeeeelings! I struggled with that last line for a long time. Thanks hon. :D

[redrockcan]

Lovely drabble!! So emotional and colourful!! *shippy sigh* I love the addition of the painting that inspired it!! Fantastic work!!

[afrakaday]

Thanks for reading, red :D I'm glad you like the art inclusion.