Sit Next to Me at Summary Judgment and I'll Grant Your Motion (Raydor/Fritz)

Jul 16, 2012 19:47

Title: Sit Next to Me at Summary Judgment and I’ll Grant Your Motion
Author: afrakaday
Rating: mild M
Word count: 3400
Spoilers through 7x10, “Fresh Pursuit”
Summary: Sharon and Fritz spend time together in and out of court.

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raydor/fritz, the closer, fanfiction

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newnumbertwo July 17 2012, 00:19:53 UTC
I just watched this ep this afternoon. I like your version better.

Moar please.

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afrakaday July 17 2012, 14:52:57 UTC
I love that you just watched the episode! So much potential for in between scenes, no? Thanks for your lovely comment.

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newnumbertwo July 17 2012, 15:00:32 UTC
We had a mini Closer marathon yesterday. Yes, there's lots of potential between scenes. I hope MC fills in more of the blanks.

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fragrantwoods July 17 2012, 00:24:48 UTC
There are no words for how perfect this is. The voices, the Gavin (all the Gavin!) and Sharon & Fritz' basically moral responsibilities to Brenda in spite of herself. The two of them getting out of their sleigh bed o' lust and talking about work in the shower--perfect :-)
It's better than the show. They're level-headed, caring people who didn't ask for this and you're playing it wonderfully, with Gavin as the most perfect Greek chorus of ever.

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afrakaday July 17 2012, 15:02:02 UTC
Gavin as Greek chorus! Thank you! That is very much what I was going for. It's been interesting to play with these characters, as none of them are exactly disinterested; their intersecting lives are so wrapped up together. I'm glad they are coming off as rational, though. More lusty hotness to come, I hope.

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dlcookie July 17 2012, 00:45:00 UTC
I am loving your Sharon/Fritz pairing. IMO they have the greatest chemistry on the show, and I love it when they have a chance to interact. Hopefully we will see a lot more of it on MC.

Keep it up!

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afrakaday July 17 2012, 15:05:02 UTC
Thanks for reading! I was dying for some interaction in yesterday's episode and sad it didn't really happen! That's what fic is for, I guess. Getting so excited for MC after seeing the new promos, especially the one with Fritz. :)

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dlcookie July 17 2012, 15:27:49 UTC
Hang tight, in a few weeks BLJ won't be around, but Sharon and Fritz will be. An affair while fun to imagine, probably wouldn't be advised. However we all know they will be interacting more, so anything is possible.

BTW, what is the Fritz promo? I don't get any of them here, and if they aren't online I have to count on descriptions by those who could see them.

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afrakaday July 17 2012, 15:48:46 UTC
It was one of the two (?) promos for MC that aired yesterday during the new episode. Not a Fritz promo per se, but he was prominently featured in maybe the second scene/screen of the promo. He looked good. :)

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Love! ts6 July 17 2012, 22:20:49 UTC
Love these!! Hoping that we get the events in between these two stories and so much more. How did they go from 'can't do this again' to stolen mornings and showers?? =) Thanks for sharing! You've captured the characters beautifully!

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Re: Love! afrakaday July 18 2012, 00:00:54 UTC
Thanks for the love! I am really bad about writing multi-part or connected stories out of order (so hard to keep that pesky muse disciplined), but I do have an idea or three for what happens in between. :) And after this one, too. I'm having a lot of fun writing them, so thank you for reading!

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Re: Love! ts6 July 18 2012, 00:12:31 UTC
Well I'll take whatever your muse prompts you to write for these two =) Just thought it'd be fun to see them struggling to keep their hands off each other. ;) I look forward to continuing to read your work!

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sira01 August 2 2012, 17:45:16 UTC
I finally found some time to continue with this series.
This is still great writing and I love the story you create for Fritz and Sharon. I can believe in this and can't wait to read your other stories for this pairing.
Btw, I'm so much in love with your Gavin.
Great job.

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afrakaday August 3 2012, 00:28:58 UTC
Thanks sira! I'm having fun writing them and am so happy that you enjoyed it. :) It means a lot that you say you can believe in it, so thank you!

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