[fic] Passes

[afoolwrites]

Title: Passes
Characters/Pairings: Yokoo/Fujigaya
Rating: R
Notes: Written for noella84 as part of a small mini exchange. I think I'm sadly calling this a wip as it’s a fraction of what I wanted to write for you but then I kept restarting over and over unhappy with it and real life became unmanageable but I just wanted to post something for you

Comments

[noella84]

ROSIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ;A;

I love it! <3333

All the feeling in this, all the feelings about debut and missed chances ;A;

Right now I'm a mess and probably this comment won't make much sense. u__u;; BUT

things he’ll only tell Yokoo in private

I love the feeling of trust between them.

just something that says at least they’re in it together.

T___T they share the painful moments too.

I had completely forgot I asked for a first time fic, and I was pleasantly surprised when I remembered reading your words.

HE SCRATCHES HIM okay, I might have liked it much more than it's healthy >_>; I really wanted to write something like that too, but never did... yet

And the space. I love how Wataru's dream is the representation of what he's feeling. ;____;

Also Fujisun melts him <3 XD

maybe if he spoils the other enough it'll lessen the chance that he’ll regret

;_____; why do I feel my heart become warm because of this? I mean, why are you negative Wataru? But at the same time he cares so much and ;____; <3

even if

[loveandcoffee]

Why do you write so well /__\ you say you're not satisfied with it, and that's something only the writer knows, but as a reader I really enjoyed it.
Also after Noemi's comment there's nothing I can say because she already said everything, so have some hearts u_u ♥♥♥♥♥

[mousapelli]

aw but really i like this is so much! It's sweet and sad, but it's good too, like they don't know what's going to happen but when all they do is wait and wait, and have no idea whether they are even waiting for anything, all of this other stuff is just passing them by while they hold their breath.

This is exactly the kind of fic that it hurt too much to write before we knew they would be safe, but now I love being able to look back even at the sad parts because it's part of what made them end up where they are now, and they mean just as much as the happy parts and all the work they put it.

So I'm really glad you wrote this and posted it!

[arashijun]

omg this is perfect! i kind of love it as is even though it could have more the sense of being unfinished is loved. i'm glad you posted it! <3

[un_sanzo]

fghjkl ;__; ♥
I love their relationship, their first time ♥, and all the not-debut feelings.
And Yokoo's dream! (should I say nightmare?) So appropriate XD

In the morning Yokoo wakes first and cooks breakfast,
I feel like this is becoming fanon