FIC: Fractures [2/4] (McKay/Sheppard, R)

[afletcherfox]

Title: Fractures [2/4]
Author: afletcherfox
Rating: R
Pairing: Eventual McKay/Sheppard
Summary: Post Trinity. Things must be broken before they can be fixed.
Spoilers: Spoilers for Season 2, Trinity, Condemned, and The Intruder.
Disclaimer: Alas, still no luck. Perhaps I'll own them next Christmas.
Author's Notes: Huge thanks to everyone who commented on the

Comments

[spacedmonkey]

YAY!

[afletcherfox]

Those silly boys. ;-)

[sawyersparrow]

Poor Rodney!! Nasty Wraith Queen trying to make him tell all but Rodney is gonna show her! Unless of course she starts using Shep, crack in a heartbeat ima sure. Love this cant wait for more!!!

[afletcherfox]

Well you've seen straight through me...and my plot. *gg* Hopefully it still turns out well.

Thanks for the comment!

[slashfictionfan]

*meep*

Am enjoying loads, although I am having to try very hard not to give in to my impulse to slap John very hard for being such so cruel to Rodney all this time.

...and Teyla and Ronon...ooooh, interesting.
Can't wait for next installment.

[afletcherfox]

Thank you for the comment!

There probably won't be much Teyla/Ronan, because I've found it hard enough to try to write John/Rodney. Perhaps next time. :-)

[sweeneybird]

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Poor Rodney - finger-breaking is a particular squick of mine, so I really ache for him. I love this story!!!

[afletcherfox]

Thank you!

Oddly finger-breaking is something I can read about without blinking, but when I watch it on TV...yowch!

[saffronhouse]

I don't think I remembered to breathe once during this. That must be why I feel so lightheaded.

In the gaze, he tried to convey everything he felt, how he was sorry for what had happened on Project Arcturus, how he hadn’t meant to betray Sheppard’s friendship, how he hoped this was somehow a payback, a demonstration of the friendship that he’d failed to show during Arcturus.

And what he says instead. Golly. Just lovely; understated and perfect.

[afletcherfox]

Awww, thank you. :-)