Salt

[afiawri]

Title: Salt
Author: Afiawri
Rating: Hard R
Characters/Pairings: Neal, Elizabeth, (Peter)
Warnings: Slave AU. Torture. Humiliation (some sexual). Brief mention of rape. It gets pretty nasty, people, if you think you might not like it, please don't even try to read. It was originally part of a much, much longer fic where Neal did eventually get some

Comments

[hoosierbitch]

You are wonderful. This is so cruel and clever and devious - unf. God, the description of him eating that omelet is painful. No one writes punishment like you, bb!

ALSO, I HAVE INTEREST IN READING MORE OF THIS!!!

[afiawri]

Thank you, thank you, thank you! :D :D :D

I think you might be the only one, hon. (IDC, I'm proud of it even if I over-warned for Neal eating an omelet.) I might just polish it up and e-mail it to you or something ;)

[hoosierbitch]

Eeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE.

*waits patiently*

[hpfan12]

I would like to read more too! It's awfully interesting even though I feel bad for Neal.

[afiawri]

Aw, thanks!

[hpfan12]

I just read the foreword (order much?) and I would love resolution :DD I can never bear leaving Neal in pain. I'm a wuss

[afiawri]

LOL, I almost never read forewords so you're already one up on me there. :) I'm editing away at the final version. I don't know what to call it, though. This was the only scene with salt XD

[hpfan12]

The salt was ingenious!! It kinda put me off food for a while, though. Yeurghh.. I am cheering you on with pom poms!

[rabidchild]

This was stark and compelling and dark and I really liked it. Reminds me somewhat of The Handmaid's Tale - idk why, but it does.

[afiawri]

Thank you!

[my_badgers_27]

BRB FINDING WATER BECAUSE I AM SUDDENLY VERY THIRSTY.

You are writing more Y/Y? This was awesome and painful to read and I liked it.