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Damage Control

Jan 03, 2011 20:30

Title: Damage Control
Author: Afiawri
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings:Bryce/Chuck
Warnings: Mentions of sex, nothing explicit.
Word Count: 610
For: chuck_slash's Slashy Sunday prompt: "It started out with a kiss. how did it end up like this? It was only a kiss. It was only a kiss!" (The Killers ~ Mr Brightside)
Summary: This has all the hallmarks of a one night ( Read more... )

rated: nc-17, !fanfiction, pairing: bryce/chuck, fandom: chuck

Comments 11

coffeethyme4me January 4 2011, 05:40:50 UTC

I don't even watch this show! But I LOVE THIS! This is written just GREAT. Thank you for sharing it. It's absolutely lovely. :-)

afiawri January 6 2011, 17:45:37 UTC

Thank you! Hearing that just brings the biggest smile to my face.

coffeethyme4me January 6 2011, 18:54:07 UTC

:-D Good!!

daria234 January 4 2011, 05:51:23 UTC

Like I said this is great!!!

afiawri January 6 2011, 17:44:23 UTC

Oh, wow, you commented again! I feel so loved. :)

hoosierbitch January 4 2011, 07:13:41 UTC

Oh, wow. The anger and pain in this is so immediate and powerful. It just tore at me. Damn.

(...I really just want to keep writing 'wow' 'cause that's all that's running through my head right now...)

afiawri January 6 2011, 17:46:24 UTC

You know, I think I can be okay if the only word I left you with is 'wow'. ;) Thank you!

rabidchild January 4 2011, 13:48:40 UTC

This is breaking my heart a little. OK, a lot. Knowing where their relationship ends up in canon makes it so sweetly painful and beautiful. Thanks for writing this. It's part of my own mental canon now.

afiawri January 6 2011, 17:47:41 UTC

Aw, thank you <3 What a wonderful comment to receive.

And I'll freely admit canon slipped my mind on this one. But maybe that's a good thing? I might've stepped back on the angst otherwise.

zalman23 January 5 2011, 03:17:34 UTC

God, Bryce is such a heart breaker here, poor little Chuck~

afiawri January 6 2011, 17:47:59 UTC

Mmm, he is, isn't he? :)