Comments | afiawri: Laying Low

afiawri

Nov 22, 2010 22:38

Title: Laying Low
Author: Afiawri
Rating: PG- some blood
Characters/Pairings: Peter, Neal
Word Count: 683
Thanks: To Elrhiarhodan; this is a response to her prompt fest IV

( Peter never realized- and he will never know- how close he came to catching Neal a half dozen times, how close he got. )

Comments 6

crism79 December 12 2010, 18:47:34 UTC

Wow, I was actually holding my breath when Pete was looking for Neal :)))) Wonderful! :D

afiawri December 13 2010, 01:59:47 UTC

Thank you. I put a lot of effort into that scene, I'm glad you liked it.

china_shop December 12 2010, 21:58:33 UTC

Ooh, awesome! Love this glimpse of life on the run. <3

afiawri December 13 2010, 02:00:10 UTC

Thank you!

leesa_perrie July 10 2012, 12:27:41 UTC

This was fun! :)

ext_840786 August 21 2012, 17:58:38 UTC

cute