Gravity (Chapter III)

[aetin]

Title: Gravity
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Rating: PG-13 (for now)
Length: 5,052 (this part)
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Summary: Kirk and Spock, from hatred to ambivalence. From aquaintances to friends. From best friends to lovers. All of the trials and tribulations in between. Starting right from the very beginning, all of the awkward moments and long

Comments

[coeurdesoleil]

This is another great chapter!

My love affair with Bones and Sulu in this fic continues (and Sulu didn't even DO anything in this chapter!). Bones is just so funny and so very Bones in this that I love him more and more with every scene (which is kind of surprising to me because I always go back and forth on whether I love him or just want to yell at him in TOS).

Jim ate lunch with Scotty, who, unsurprisingly, was eating a sandwich, “So glad we have replicators here! Have you ever gone months without real food?”
“Yeah,” answered Jim without thinking about it.
Tarsus IV?! Oh god, the angst, I can sense it already!

Is it wrong that I kind of wish the captain's chair WOULD topple? =) I'm giggling just thinking about it!

Your role is not to talk, but to merely make an appearance. All agreements will be made by Ambassador Grace, seconded by Commander Spock, and then signed by all parties present.I really wanted to smack the Starfleet admiral here: They were the ones who promoted Kirk to captain! The least they could do is pretend to

[rae1013]

I'm really enjoying this story. I like how you include all the characters and really seem to have nailed their voices. <3

[poprock_pixie]

I am loving this story. Your characterization feels spot on, and I love that you left Tarsus (at least, I think that's what you did...) as a part of Kirk's history. The angst potential increased exponentially!

[devilishdestiny]

great so far, can't wait for more!

[davincis_girl]

Wonderful.