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Aug 24, 2004 02:43

thick clouds float northwest
cool breeze, flags flapping
we can't charge hourly rates

renku, shift, haiku

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I LOVE YOU! buddhalotus August 24 2004, 10:10:02 UTC
Hourly rates huh? (raises eyebrow) What have you been doing?
Just kidding! I'm glad you are writing more peoms.....please don't feel like you are in M's shadow.....he is a good Haiku writer, a good dad, and good husband......but we all have our talents. You spend a lot of time researching and linking in order to have lengthy well thought out entrys.
But I do have to I rather enjoy your little poems......keep up the great work sweety.

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Re: I LOVE YOU! aethyrflux August 25 2004, 04:13:51 UTC
i suppose it's more like having become accustomed to learning an artform through collaboration with others...
and when you get your own personal studio, you don't have your colleagues looking over your shoulder anymore...
thanks for your offering your encouragement and love, my dear!

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polyphonic_me August 24 2004, 10:24:16 UTC
it flows so nice...

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aethyrflux August 25 2004, 04:07:19 UTC
aw, gee... thanks %~}
i am accustomed to utilizing the techniques of link and shift in longer pieces.
whether through the medium of textual poetry, or with film montage; but it's challenging for me to achieve this in a three line haiku!

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