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Aug 23, 2004 01:15

slow night, pleasant rain
plate of uneaten cookies
my pounding headache

renku, shimi, haiku

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polyphonic_me August 23 2004, 10:03:17 UTC
ha ha nice...

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thank you, dear sister... aethyrflux August 24 2004, 01:20:39 UTC
your comment has really encouraged me.
i'm flattered that you even noticed my scribblings...
i read your journal regularly, and hope that you feel my silent presence.
i shall endeavor to voice my thoughts so that you can see them more readily.
i think of you fondly, quite often!

although i have enjoyed writing renku with a group, i have often been somewhat reluctant to attempt writing haiku alone.
sometimes, i feel that i am in the shadow of my friend, shimi.
he has always provided me with trusted counsel, and has mentored me in numerous subjects (chess, poetry, physics).
so, i suppose i'm stretching my wings independently now (fluttering out of the nest)?

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Re: thank you, dear sister... polyphonic_me August 24 2004, 10:32:33 UTC
You are such a poetic soul and I am glad you have friends like shimi....it is hard to find people to talk about art nowadays..It nearly kills me:)

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fulguritus August 23 2004, 19:37:59 UTC
looks like a haiku
hey i don't have your #
mine is 947-4847, i'm trying to get in touch with william, i need his address.
call me if you can. love~

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aethyrflux August 24 2004, 01:23:22 UTC
AHA!
my number is 5 1 2 . 4 2 8 . 8 6 5 0 .
i'll see if i can't dig his up soon;
he can be contacted through his work
at the downtown fed-ex/kinko's
on the morning shift

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buddhalotus August 24 2004, 10:02:23 UTC
Ahhhh.....that's a nice peom....I should write more poems.

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