.fic: Infinite which is yes - McKay/Sheppard (NC17) 1.1

[aesc]

.title: Infinite which is yes
.rating/warnings: NC17 for the *koff*
.disclaimers: Not mine. Commence lamentation... now.
.advertisements: post-beach!sex. Follow up to the untitled beach volleyball ficlet, which has its own odd pedigree.

.notes: Part of this could not have been done (or at least, could not have been done as well) without chebonne and her

Comments

[mcalex22]

Fast, hot and passionate sex. The urgency is there and I love it! I like it when they're both struggling to get out of their clothes. Again, no boxers = woo hoo! I think I have a kink there...

Thanks for sharing :D

[aesc]

Again, no boxers = woo hoo! I think I have a kink there...

:D Completely understandable.

[lokte]

When they get together it is infused with the light and warmth from the first part and touches of the sandy beach. Lovely continuation which I wasn't expecting, I will be thinking of warm tanned skin all day for the second day in a row.

Thank you :)

[aesc]

Thank you so much! I wasn't expecting it to turn quite this way, but I'm happy it did.

I will be thinking of warm tanned skin all day for the second day in a row.

Hee! But they are pleasant things to think about :)

[syntaxe]

'Everything about John is heat: the words, breath that carries them, his body with leftover sunlight.'
God, your writing is beautiful. I feel like I've watched you paint this. Thank you.

[aesc]

Thank you so much! *beam* As for painting this, I wish someone would *wibble*

[chebonne]

Guh.

God, I could quote half this fic back to you and still it wouldn't express my adoration. And you said my words were beautiful. Summer, and sun, and Atlantis, and Rodney and how they all love John so, so much... and John loves them back, gives as much as he takes...

Again I say "guh".

[aesc]

Summer, and sun, and Atlantis, and Rodney and how they all love John so, so much... and John loves them back, gives as much as he takes...

*wibble* See? That's what I mean! In the last post you were talking about sun and Atlantis and John, and wham that turned into Rodney and John in John's room with the windows open and the afternoon sun, and everything else just went from there.

[chebonne]

Hee! I'm so glad I could be an insiration! I can see that scene you painted so vividly - so vividly I can almost smell it; summer, and ocean, and that clean scent of air. Fits so well with John and Rodney. God, it's days like this when I really long for summer.

[chebonne]

And now you inspired me. It's really too bad I'm such a lousy fanficcer and all I write is original fiction, but all this talk about golden men in golden moments really got me going. I can smell summer in the air!

[lerah99]

WOW! You made my morning with this. This fic is better than coffee. Heck, it's better than chocolate. The imagery is incredible. The description of John's skin, Rodney's facination, this is all sweet and hot and fantastic. Thank you so much for posting. I adore this piece!

[aesc]

Bwee! Thank you so much!

This fic is better than coffee. Heck, it's better than chocolate.

No way, not possible. *shakes head* Oh my God, I haven't had my coffee yet... *rushes off*