Fic: paper.planes (2/6)

[aeroport_art]

Title: paper.planes (2/6)
Pairing: Jensen/Jared
Author: aeroport_art
Rating: eventual NC-17
Warnings: None
Word Count: 3,231 (24,000)
Disclaimer: Not mine, no money being made.
Notes: Thanks to nativestar and lavendervamp for brit-picking this round. As always, feedback = <3

Summary: In which Jared is a wee British undergrad, and Jensen, American postgrad extraordinnaire,

Comments

[lycaness]

Hey, I'm really enjoying this so far, I love how Jared's totally infatuated but is trying to convince himself it's just friendship.
There was one thing though, in this paragraph - "When they reach the bar, Sam gets a John Smith’s for himself and orders Sandy her favorite drink (lemon drop, dash of Triple Sec). They clink glasses and Jared immediately knocks half of his lager back, Sandy watching the amber liquid drain while she sips her martini." - 1) You've got a Sam in there, lol. Also, John Smith's in bitter not lager, so it's a brown colour not amber. Thought I'd point that out so you could alter it if you wanted.
Okay, I'm off to read the next bit, I'm really enjoying this and can't wait to see where it goes. :)

[aeroport_art]

Omg you're SO RIGHT. Thank you so much for pointing that out o_o *iz embarrassed*

Heheh, thanks for all your feedback though *__* I'm really happy you like!

[danaid_luv]

I'm really enjoying this :) The only trouble I have is remembering to hear an accent other than the slight Padalecki drawl. Heh.

[aeroport_art]

Heh, well I'm glad you like. Thanks for reading!

[hyperhermit]

Do we really say bent? Just wondering...
I love the IT kid thing we sure do have a few. At my old uni we had Blair Son and there are always a few Arabian princess and rich Asians and spawn of russian oligarchs..
Oh and your descriptions of the library give me such a nostalgic feeling... MMMMM i always loved libraries. Wierd i know.

[aeroport_art]

I dunno, you tell me! I got the word from one of my proofers though, so at least some English people say it.

[fanofsuper]

Great update even is still a little confused about certain terms I can usually make out what they mean.

Have you ever considered adding a UK English to North American English translation ?

Off to read the next part

[aeroport_art]

Heh, I dunno isn't the confusion part of the fun??

[fanofsuper]

Most times yes but when you don't understand what some things are, can lose what the story is saying

[mass_hipgnosis]

*draws hearts* I really really love Brit!Jared to a probably unhealthy degree.