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ayesakara May 22 2013, 05:54:03 UTC
I just sat and read the first 13 chapters in one go and I must tell you this story is fantastic! You've come up with a very plausible AU plotline, and the characterizations are amazingly done. Everyone from Kirk and Spock, to Bones, to Uhura and Scotty, and Chekov and Sulu, not to mention Pike..... are wonderfully in character. And your description of the cultural and societal divide on Earth is very interesting. I love how Kirk affects Spock, and vice versa. And the Orions on Earth..... very clever twist. Can't wait to read more!

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aerlalaith May 22 2013, 07:20:44 UTC
Wow, thanks! I'm glad you're liking it so far.

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rabidchild May 22 2013, 11:39:15 UTC
The plot thickens nicely. I love the implications you've left here of some intergalactic conspiracy. Can't wait for more.

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aerlalaith May 23 2013, 02:30:50 UTC
Awesome. More soon.

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