"History" - SVU

[aeonian]

Follows "Separation." Also posted at lawandorderfic.

Title: History
Author: Nia
Rating: PG
Show: SVU
Pairing: Olivia/Maureen
Summary: "So Maureen takes off her jacket, drops it on the floor like she does at home, leaves little things here and there, a shoe at the end of the bed, a shoe by the bedside table, a bracelet on the dresser and a sock among the

Comments

[breaksuchaheart]

Well. This is very interesting. You're a great writer and I have to admit that I am drawn in, even though it's off the wall. Great job. :D

[aeonian]

Thank you so much! I know, they're such an odd pairing, but something about it...

[thenewhope]

I'm so glad that it's you writing this. a lesser writer wouldn't be able to do these characters and this oddball pairing justice.

your use of the little things in this story is perfect - subtle and beautiful and just a little bit heartbreaking (and exactly as it should be).

[projectcyborg]

eeeeee, and Olivia takes her home! love you!!

she will do anything to get in bed with a blue-eyed blonde again... Maureen remembers what Dad said about Olivia once: self-destructive. She wonders if this is what he meant.

guh so perfect! another killer last line. I *heart* Maulita fanon ohsomuch.

aaaaaangstcakes yay!

(still confused about why she takes the subway, though -- if Olivia drives home, wouldn't she just take Maureen? and aren't you contradicting yourself [deliberately?] when you say "history is nothing. History is all she knows about Olivia" and then "Maureen knows she has an unfair advantage"?)

[aeonian]

PS - You're alive!

So, shall I write a third?

Olivia drives home? I thought she didn't have a car, and Maureen actually has no idea how Olivia gets home. But even if Olivia does drive, Maureen takes the subway because (1) she doesn't want anyone to see her own car at Olivia's, (2) she doesn't want anyone to see Olivia driving her back to the precinct for her own car, (3) she doesn't plan on leaving Olivia's apartment with Olivia, and (4) between the end of "Separation" and the beginning of "History," Olivia gives Maureen the directions to her own apartment and then goes home, leaving anything else up to Maureen, because Olivia doesn't want to take the blame for whatever happens next.

I guess there's a contradiction between "history is nothing" and "Maureen knows she has an unfair advantage," since history is something enough to give Maureen an advantage. Is that what you meant?

[projectcyborg]

So, shall I write a third?

YES! but, you know, I don't object to the other things you're writing either. I'm trying to make giantessmess write Maulita, heh.

ah, I guess I assumed Olivia drove because Maureen took the subway alone. (4) makes perfect sense.

yup, that's what I meant. I was nitpicking. this is a such a lovely fic.

[aeonian]

Hee. Yes, continue the corruption! I keep meaning to make this a trilogy, and then other totally delicious pairings capture my attention.

[greenovalfruit]

Again, awesome and amazing! You rock. The best thing was that it was believable.
*waves hand in the air* I have a teenage crush on Olivia!! lol

[aeonian]

Thanks!

And hee...who doesn't?

[greenovalfruit]

The oldies. They're just sick *winks*

[sciencekitty]

Maureen remembers what Dad said about Olivia once: self-destructive. She wonders if this is what he meant.

Beautiful. =)