Vow of Silence

[aelimir]

Title: Vow of Silence
Author: Aelimir
Pairing: Erik/Charles
Genre: Romance/Drama/slave!fic
Rating: NC-17
Summary: AU. All mutants were enslaved during a Holocaust. (no Jewish Holocaust) Shaw killed Erik's parents but let Erik go, believing him human when he showed no outward signs of mutation. Erik sets out on a quest of revenge. One night, he meets a

Comments

[aelimir]

Thank you! I will do my best to see it through to the end. :) Next chapter very soon!

[lunafille]

OMG! Shaw has Raven?! Yikes!

I was out of town when you posted the chapter before this one, so I just want to say - CHARLES! Oh no! Poor BB! I so hope Erik and Logan can save Raven from Shaw and bring her to see her brother, and hopefully *fingers crossed* that will bring him out of his coma.

Wonderful chapter! I really like Jean - she's sweet :) and I liked how you both compared and contrasted her powers with Charles', especially their effect on Erik. I think that makes perfect sense that Charles' would be more erratic because he has that emotional connection to Erik, too, so his powers are amplified and maybe a little out of control when it comes to his lover.

I also like Amy and appreciate how she is trying to help the mutants. I think it's sweet that she feels motherly toward Charles. :)

Love the driving plot of this fic! Very compelling story! I'm excited to read the next part! Great chapter! :D

[aelimir]

Your comments are so great, they leave me speechless. :) Thank you! Next chapter will be up within the next few days.