New Tracks, Part 18

[aelfgyfu_mead]

"New Tracks" by AelfgyfuPARTS: 20 plus epilogue

Comments

[lukadreaming]

This is such a powerful ep, with the tension of the chase and the intensity of all the emotions. I feel drained after having read it!

I know I've said this before, but I like the way you write Connor. In this ep the way he sounds and the way he acts really gel for me -- and usually he's not a character who interests me a great deal.

[aelfgyfu_mead]

Thanks!

[canadian_jay]

*whimpers softly and huddles in a corner*

Great chapter, but still so sad. The poor woman and her dog! And Stephen sooo tired.

[aelfgyfu_mead]

I don't know whether to apologize for making you so sad, or just be glad the chapter was effective. Maybe both!

[reggietate]

Wow, that was intense!

Stephen's shoulder suddenly felt cold where Cutter's hand had been.

That says a lot about the way things are in just a few words. I'm glad Cutter apologised to Stephen. Stephen's bound to feel guilty, but he did everything he possibly could, and hurt himself doing it, he's definitely not to blame. Like Connor said, sometimes it's just plain bad luck.

Terrific instalment :-)

[aelfgyfu_mead]

Thanks!

[knitekat]

Tense and then eek over the poor dog and woman. Yay for the team rallying around Stephen. Loved the Connor talks to Stephen bit.

[aelfgyfu_mead]

Thanks. Stephen seems most at ease with Connor, at least when things are tense with Nick.

[fredbassett]

Poor woman, poor dog! I'm a sucker for crying when pets are killed!

Powerful episode, and I loved the way Connor dealt with Stephen at the end. He came over very well there.

[aelfgyfu_mead]

Thanks!