New Tracks, Part 15

Aug 28, 2010 12:58

"New Tracks" by AelfgyfuPARTS: 20 plus epilogue ( Read more... )

primeval, fanfic

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canadian_jay August 28 2010, 18:03:51 UTC
Oh, Nickie! *wails a little overdramatically* That final paragraph was just! ..!!

Great chapter, although now I'm all worried. I mean, FIVE velociraptors?

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aelfgyfu_mead August 28 2010, 18:09:07 UTC
You'll just have to see what happens in the next few installments!

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reggietate August 28 2010, 18:03:58 UTC
Nick continues to be a worry-wart, but you can't blame him, especially with raptors around. The truth is, they really need Stephen. Noel's doing his best, but he just doesn't have the experience yet.

The exchange between Lester and Stephen was a delight.

"I've already faced a vengeful Leek. I'd rather not have to deal with a vengeful Cutter."

Definitely!

Great instalment :-)

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aelfgyfu_mead August 28 2010, 18:09:22 UTC
Thanks!

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knitekat August 28 2010, 19:19:49 UTC
Love the Stephen and Lester conversation, and then Stephen trying to convince Nick. Poor Nick is worrying a lot over Stephen, but they do need him. Eek over 5 raptors!

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aelfgyfu_mead August 28 2010, 19:34:20 UTC
Nick isn't being entirely rational at this point. Lester is actually more rational.

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knitekat August 28 2010, 19:37:17 UTC
Lester is actually more rational True, but he's still not willing to risk an anger Cutter (or the others).

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lukadreaming August 28 2010, 20:06:54 UTC
I almost feel sorry for Lester having to deal with this lot *g*. And the thought of the raptors is scary . . .

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aelfgyfu_mead August 29 2010, 02:01:23 UTC
At least Lester isn't on site in this adventure. He's somewhat insulated from the Wrath of Cutter!

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starlight976 August 28 2010, 23:10:51 UTC
Bahaha, I loved that bit between Lester and Stephen! I feel a little bad that Noel's getting the short end of everything. But he just isn't Stephen. At the same time, I miss seeing Stephen in action, but he's just not up to it yet. I wish he'd get that through his thick skull!

This was wonderful, I love it and I can't wait to see what happens next!

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aelfgyfu_mead August 29 2010, 02:02:06 UTC
Stephen does have an exceptionally thick skull.

Glad you're enjoying it!

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