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'# LOVE...PAIN [3/4]

Jul 22, 2010 01:00

TITLE: '# LOVE...PAIN [3/4]
PAIRING: broken!OnewxKey, Jonghyun/Minho, KeyxJunsu
MEMBERS: Jaejoong
GENRE: angst(?), romance, drama
RATING: PG
WARNING: Unbeta-ed
SUMMARY: Not long ago Key and Onew used to date. Their relationship was perfect, that was what Key was convinced of. That it wasn't as perfect as it seemed, became obvious when Onew left ( Read more... )

band: dbsk, member: jaejoong, genre: romance, genre: crossover, !fanfiction, pairing: key/junsu, pairing: broken!onew/key, band: shinee, rating: pg, genre: drama, pairing: joghyun/minho

Comments 8

ayaisdifferent July 21 2010, 23:29:56 UTC

Aw, Jae is too cute <3
umma-talk xD

and key's new hair is gorgeous! XD
one of the best hairstyle he ever had! xxD

guess what?
i missed ontae xxD

and the attention-whores are back!
i love both of them <3
and i like the way they fight xD

but i love you more ~ <3 xD

aegyo_less July 22 2010, 00:02:52 UTC

Yeah umma coffee party xD
They should be cooking together... I think there has to be an Epilogue xD

Ontae will be appearing in the last chap, pinky promise <3

Yes the poor boys were having a hard time without any appearances in the 2'nd chapter xD

I love u2 unni <3

sehr schoen ^^ kidkidden July 22 2010, 01:14:55 UTC

sehr schoen ^^was anderes als sehr schoen faellt mir dazu eigentlich nicht mehr ein ^^

Auch wenn ich lieber Key und Taemin haette, so isses auch ok lol

Re: sehr schoen ^^ aegyo_less July 22 2010, 04:34:41 UTC

Sorry, no TaeKey this time...
But if you tell me your wish, maybe I'll write a oneshot just for you? xD I'm not really good at this... but still, I could try, right?

Anyway thank you for calling that chapter beautiful xD and thanks for reading <3

hikaritsubasa July 22 2010, 05:33:38 UTC

both of them called but they didn't reach each other...
how sad...
update soon....

aegyo_less July 22 2010, 15:38:21 UTC

Wouldn't it be too easy if they just reached each other?
I update as soon as possible <3

melalocket July 22 2010, 10:46:19 UTC

i like key new hair .. well at first its abit akward to see him like that.. but i get use to it.. haha
and he looks so hot at the MV >.<

he is almighty , so he can make everything works for him.. ^^ even that kind of hair style ...
but i think about that girls group dance too hahaha...
but key is key.. he still will look cute lol...

aegyo_less July 22 2010, 14:47:15 UTC

Yeah, I needed some time to get used to his new hair... but it's okay now xD It's something new...and it's still better than his short, orange curls... x)

Yep, I think his hair and girl group dances won't go together... but maybe... I'm sure he will surprise us all XD