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fic: grey would be the color

Aug 01, 2011 02:44

Title: grey would be the color
Author: ester_inc
Team: ANGST
Prompt: overwhelmed
Word Count: ~395
Warnings: Murder
Rating: PG
Summary: The first time is always the hardest.
Beta: eternalsojourn

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( Arthur's vision goes in and out of focus, and there's a strange quality to the world around him, like the edges are bleeding out, leaving behind a peculiar lack of color. )

team angst, prompt: overwhelmed, fanfic

Comments 14

amenosonata August 3 2011, 04:45:30 UTC

Guh, so good . This is gut-wrenching and beautiful. I guess almost everyone has to go through the same kind of thing before they can shoot without blinking.

ester_inc August 3 2011, 05:03:07 UTC

I'm happy to hear that! Thank you so much! :)

lezzerlee August 15 2011, 08:31:13 UTC

Eames being impatient w/Arthur, almost disappointed, just drives the knife in my heart.

What a beautiful way to show a human side to Arthur, him not being a robot, or something so fierce all the time.

ester_inc August 16 2011, 23:47:15 UTC

I think Eames' reaction was the hardest part for me to write, really. I had to remind myself that I'm writing angst here, ha. Thank you! ♥