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Fic: Mr. Eames and The Third Eye - Part 3

Jul 19, 2011 11:49

Title: Mr. Eames and The Third Eye
Author: avocado_love
Team: Angst
Prompt(s): Naked, Horizon, Natural
Word count: 2,300 (this chapter)
Rating: PG-13 (eventual NC-17)
Warnings: Character death in this chapter (Mal)
Notes: Based off of this prompt in the Kink Meme. This chapter is light-ish on angst right now, but expect more in the following chapters. Also, Eames is ( Read more... )

prompt: horizon, team angst, prompt: naked, prompt: natural, wip

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avocado_love July 20 2011, 00:49:53 UTC

I know right? haha. Thanks for the comment!

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avocado_love July 20 2011, 00:53:51 UTC

Confession: I'm a total skeptic, but I've lived in some very new age heavy areas of the States, and have been exposed to this stuff all my life. At least I haven't introduced the concept of 'aura massage' in the fic. *eye twitch* Anyway, thank you so much for your comment! It means a lot that you think Eames' voice is IC. :D

zowiebwalker July 20 2011, 05:24:56 UTC

LOL! Eye-twitch!

immoral_crow July 19 2011, 19:44:19 UTC

Oh I do love this!

avocado_love July 20 2011, 00:54:18 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you like it. Thanks for your comment. :D

ladderax July 19 2011, 20:17:41 UTC

I love how psychologically insightful this is, how you capture Arthur's and Cobb's dynamic in just a few amazing sentences. The auras are also so revealing of their characters. I feel terrible for Eames, having this weird "gift" that's beautiful on one hand but also terrible, because of how isolating it is and how he's doomed to have the burden of knowledge that can't actually help people all that often. I can't wait for the next part of this!

avocado_love July 20 2011, 01:00:22 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind comment. It's been a lot of fun to think about who the characters are and try to represent that in auras. I'm glad you like it! And yes, poor Eames. He sees too much, in some ways. I would think that bearing that sort of a burden would be damaging in more ways than one.

But that's why they call it Team Angst! :D Thanks again!

kansouame July 19 2011, 20:31:56 UTC

Just beautiful. Eames' discussion with Marie was so insightful and touching. Keep going!!!

* smushes you with ♥ *

avocado_love July 20 2011, 01:02:26 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked this part, and with the OC. She made a convenient foil. (Whahaha) Thanks again!